Monday, September 14, 2015
Entry 1:
The first week of school we discussed beauty, and while hearing everyone in class say what they found beautiful, I noticed that beauty comes in many forms. Everyone had a different take on what is beautiful. Some were tangible things, others were sights in nature, and some were even qualities in people. What I find beautiful is culture, and how the area of the world people are from can shape their entire life. Culture affects the type of structures in an area, the language spoken, the type of clothes worn, and even the religious beliefs of people. Culture defines an era, such as Ancient Greece and Rome, Ancient Egypt, the Gothic period, and even Modern architecture. Without even thinking about it, we associate a time period to a type of people. I find it beautiful how people change over time, and how the change of culture affects the world.
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I can feel how exciting when you talk about learning during the first week. But you still need pay a little more attention on writing.
ReplyDeleteAt the beginning, you may want to say "During the first week of school we discussed beauty. While hearing ..." It's not quite make sense when using "some ..., others..., and some ..." Please consider whether you summarize the impacts of culture completely and whether the era examples are comparable.